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We can dig
And dig
And dig
Searching
Just pick
And pick
We can pick
But
Really
Is the hunt for
The perfect one
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The nosebleed?
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I love the shape of this poem. Somehow it adds more to the imagery and the "search" of the poem. Was this your "hunter/hunted" poem? And that last line was perfect! It makes me thinks of times running all my energy into exhaustion on summer days just to return with a nosebleed from the heat and still not be satisfied with all the playing I did that day...
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you squeezed all of that out of my poem about a hunt for the perfect booger lol. The image is of a boys face with his tongue out. I guess after reading it, it describes multiple aspects of childhood.
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