Light
shines through the window blinds
I
have a choice to make
Rise
up or stay down
Smile
or frown
Either
way, today is a new day
I
must choose which way
I
will go
Backward
or forward
Grief
or happiness
Increase
or decrease
Strengthening
or weakening
Improvement
or decline
Only
time will tell
Fast
forward
No
rewind
I see you. I think what you need here is to fully explore the feelings that you present in this poem. Confront that feeling of struggle and indecisiveness and fully illustrate what that feels like/looks like.
ReplyDeleteAgreed. I feel like it's over just when it's revving up to something epic. We all know Amaziah goes hard; feel free to prove us right.
ReplyDeleteBut what if there was a rewind?...I'll wait.
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